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''(Andoria - City of She'nah Hoorn, 1 block south of the Culture Center - [[ | ''(Andoria - City of She'nah Hoorn, 1 block south of the Culture Center - [[Suvven D'nall]] - 0610, day 14)'' | ||
Suvven, not yet sixteen, watched the Commander sink to his knees and then slowly fall face forward into the bloody dust. The back of his head had been removed by the high power phaser shot he had just taken, his proud and tattered uniform was splattered with yet more blood by his senseless murder. If nothing else, he felt no more pain. | Suvven, not yet sixteen, watched the Commander sink to his knees and then slowly fall face forward into the bloody dust. The back of his head had been removed by the high power phaser shot he had just taken, his proud and tattered uniform was splattered with yet more blood by his senseless murder. If nothing else, he felt no more pain. |